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They say follow your heart
But what if your heart is lost
In a fog around it and can’t see
That love is only dragging it down
So I tried letting my brain lead
It wasn’t much better for
As I learned it too is fogged down
With false hope and love
Chasing something that can never be caught
What am I left to do but lead with my eyes?
But sadly enough my eyes got lost in yours
Running out of choices I lead with my ears
Hearing his voice and sweetness made me unable
To hear the truth and the truth is he was never
Going to be just mine.  I was lost in a world
Only to be lead down every trail to him.
I would travel down new roads
But every door was slammed in my face
Just to have his open wider.  I sit now
Waiting for that other to take my hand
And lead me to his road and away from the past.
But until he comes I remain lost
Off the right path.  Waiting…..  just waiting…….  
©2004-2009 ~pyropixie923
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yeah ok I wrote this during school once when we didn't have p.e. we just had to sit and work on homework and stuff.

teh suckage

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:iconinhiskeeping:
awww i like this...especially how you use all your senses to say how there like all only hearing and seeing him...or something like that... anyways i like it nice job :)

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your halo's slipping down to choke you now...
:iconpyropixie923:
thank you very much! it's probably my favorite of mine but only cuz it's everyone else's favorite
:iconwendaline:
im not much use at poetry myself but this one is relly good.
:iconpyropixie923:
aww thank you very much
:iconpyropixie923:
this is actually one of my least favorites.

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April 26, 2004
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